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作者: lokyue 時間: 2008-1-11 08:47 AM 標題: 自編自導自演的-黑白相PROJECT

Any comment please?

作者: gfdvv 時間: 2008-1-11 01:17 PM

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作者: kingone 時間: 2008-1-11 06:42 PM

好象是什么广告的吧:onion14:

作者: carolfeeling 時間: 2008-1-11 10:22 PM

好！佳作，有一股说不出的忧伤。
赤脚，抽烟，等待。。

他等待的是。。。什么？

作者: limsp5 時間: 2008-1-12 12:31 AM

Crop the photos by at least 1/3 on the left or close the door.
The dark background takes up too much attention.

作者: coolman831 時間: 2008-1-12 08:37 AM

Good pic... it shows that this little girl is waiting for a male.... sell sex...
However, what's up with the black door? the girl about to fall down to a hole?
Again,... that pull too much attention.

作者: lokyue 時間: 2008-1-12 01:08 PM 標題: 回復 #5 limsp5 的帖子

thankz! i agree with ur comment! the dark area took over the girl....

作者: lokyue 時間: 2008-1-12 01:09 PM 標題: 回復 #6 coolman831 的帖子

thankz! hope i will improve next time=]

作者: Frinson 時間: 2008-1-18 02:45 PM

几好几好..

作者: ZedD 時間: 2008-6-21 06:45 PM

if can close up a bit better. u don know her??

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